Spring time, radiant sunshine, sweet scents and bright sunshine bring are all beautiful things, but unfortunately bring one thing that is dreaded by everyone. Bees. Playing innocently in her yard by her mother’s flower patch, Anna was enjoying herself. Annoyingly and loudly, she heard her least favorite sound of buzzing. “Ahh! Eeeek! Go away bees! Get out of here now!” She shrieked and squirmed around. Anna tried walking away, but they followed her everywhere. Her floral green dress and her red hair attracted the bees. While she walked away, she gradually attracted more and more of the pesky bugs.
“Mom! Mom! Help me, please! These bees won’t get away from me” Anna yelled inside to her mom cleaning the kitchen.
“Don’t come in here with those things! I’m cleaning in here and I don’t need those bugs coming in here stinging your little brother and scaring the dog. I told you to wear bug spray!”
Anna moaned in annoyance. Her biggest fear was getting stung by one of the buzzing bees. She walked down to her favorite spot, praying they would leave her, but they did not. Her favorite spot was the lake down by Tellow Street. Anna realized that bees cannot go in the water. If she went into the water she could not get stung. She ran down the long boardwalk, held her nose, and jumped into the lake. When her legs went into the water, she felt a pinch on her ankle. She felt stings up her legs to her thighs. What? She thought to herself, confused. The lake had recently gotten an infestation of jellyfish she was not aware of. By jumping in the lake to get away from the sting of the bees, she was stung by jellyfish. Anna hopped out of the water, discouraged and annoyed. As she shook herself off and began to walk home, a bee flew down into her hair. Perfect.
Very good story. I see the irony in that she went in the water to not get stung but got stung anyways. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThere was a lot of irony when she tried to avoid being stung by a bee, but she ended up getting stung by a jellyfish trying to avoid it
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ReplyDeleteIt was ironic that she went into the water to not get stung, but she got stung anyways.
ReplyDeleteLOL I can't believe the girl went into the water so she wouldn't get stung, but she did anyways! Great Story I loved it!
ReplyDeleteWhile she was trying to get away from the bees, she ran into a new danger and was stung by the jellyfish. Then once she got out of the water, she was stung again by a bee. You wouldn't expect jellyfish to be in the water and sting her!
ReplyDeleteWhile she was trying to get away from the bees, she ran into a new danger and was stung by the jellyfish. Then once she got out of the water, she was stung again by a bee. You wouldn't expect jellyfish to be in the water and sting her!
ReplyDeleteit was ironic that se didn't want to get stung by the bee but got stung by the jelly fish instead, nice job!
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the story. the irony was that she was trying to get away from bees that could sting her in the lake but was then stung by jellyfish!
ReplyDeleteOh my god the girl went into the water to not get stung by bees but then was stung by a jellyfish ahahahaha how ironic
ReplyDeleteVery comedic! Love the irony!
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